Comments on: Pale Gurl – Cube Jungle

By: Ryan Cole

Ryan Cole — Wed, 16 May 2012 05:56:59 +0000

Joleen, this is some profound, original comedy writing. I enjoyed laughing at these jokes again, but I swear I heard a lady comic or maybe a teacher telling these jokes around town. Chicken and egg thing, I guess. The blurbs where you quote a part of the article right next to the part of the article being quoted are a nice pro-touch. If you really want to be a professional writer, though, you need to make sure that the part quoted isn’t really an exact quote of the original sentence. That’s how they always do it in Reader’s Digest, anyway.

By: Paul Woodford

Paul Woodford — Tue, 15 May 2012 23:01:53 +0000

In reply to Ryan Cole.

Thanks for the input. I tend to agree with you but it’s a limitation of this particular plugin. It’s not Joleen’s fault. I should search for a new one but I really like the look of this one apart from that minor limitation. – Editor

By: Wendy Boorn

Wendy Boorn — Sun, 13 May 2012 04:03:20 +0000

Hey Joleen, I just read both of your articles, and they are a hoot (is “hoot” still a word?)! Your wry, but good-natured, observational voice is an oasis in the desert of comedy writing – kind of reminds me of Dave Barry, and that is a supreme compliment. Thanks for telling it like it is!
Wendy